Show HN: Feedback on my ebook landing page

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14 years ago

I've just launched a landing page for an ebook that I hope to have out sometime in June but I feel like that dog in the meme "I have no idea what I'm doing."[1] I am not a designer (or copywriter) but I've been hanging out on HN long enough to have a good idea where to go for help. I used Bootstrap[2] for a template, Colour Lovers[3] for a palette and Weebly's homepage[4] for inspiration.

Weebly's homepage is fantastic but as much as I tried to keep it simple and powerful, like Weebly, I kept getting bogged down in massive amounts copy. I think this is probably where I need to most help. After visiting the site, do you know what the ebook is about? Are the problems its trying to address apparent?

Of course any feedback on copy, design, etc. would be greatly appreciated.

URL: http://startupprivacy.com

[1]http://ihavenoideawhatiamdoing.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/08/dog_science.jpg

[2]http://twitter.github.com/bootstrap

[3]http://www.colourlovers.com/palette/292482/Terra

[4]http://weebly.com

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