Ask HN: Bad writing? Product unconvincing? Please review my product pages!

7 points

15 years ago

I've written some sales-y pages for a product that's almost finished, I'd love to get some feedback on the pages here:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/443080/landing/home.html

Is the writing bad? Is the product not well explained? Is the value proposition unclear? Would you sign up?

Please feel free to tear this apart, I'd love any input, I've been working on this by myself so I'm getting a bit stuck... Thanks!!

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