My best friend and I needed some more creativity in our lives, so we've just launched a card game kickstarter as a side project. We've played this a ton informally with our friends and many groups of people.

We've just launched to a few friends and family before our bigger launch Thursday. We can still edit any part of our pitch. Any feedback? Specifically, any ideas how to make the message to buy more compelling? Any concerns that we should address? Appreciate any and all comments!